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The Ghost In My Machine

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Creepypasta Of The Week: “Knocking”

May 9, 2018 by Lucia

Previously: “I Proposed To My Girlfriend, But She’d Been Replaced.”

In some ways, the creepypasta “Knocking” reminds me of Fredric Brown’s “Knock” — the short story that begins with a standalone short-short story all its own. You know the one: “The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door…”

A brown door in a black wall

Of course, “Knocking” departs dramatically from there; while Brown’s story is sci-fi, “Knocking,” written by Steven Shorter and available on the Creepypasta Wikia under a CC BY-SA Creative Commons license, is straight-up horror. Indeed, it’s a terrific example of how horrifying the most mundane things can be: Sure, it’s not unusual to hear a knocking at your door… but what if you’re not expecting anyone to visit? What if the door in question isn’t the door to you home or your office, but the kind of door one doesn’t expect to hear someone knocking on? You have no idea who or what could be on the other side; the party responsible for the knocking is an unknown quantity, and that’s terrifying.

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Of course, it’s also worth remembering that one day, your positions could be flipped. What happens when you’re the person on the other side?

Food for thought.

It started when I was six years old.

I was in school, it was the middle of a reading lesson, and I needed to pee, badly. At that age, actually, a fair few kids still wet themselves, and I always got paranoid about embarrassing myself in public like that. I stuck my hand up and told Mrs. Zebby that I needed to use the bathroom. After the usual speech about how I “should have gone at break”, she gave me the key to the Disabled-Access toilet. (As it was the closest one to my classroom.)

It was the middle of fifth period, and the corridors were empty and seemed cavernous to me: I was a short, scrawny thing back then. I sometimes had trouble with doors, especially unlocking them, and I fumbled for a good minute or two in trying to get the blasted thing open.

Anyway, as I sat on my porcelain throne, there came a knocking at the door.

“Someone’s in here,” I called, disgruntled at this disturbance.

There came a pause, then the knocking resumed. It was faster now, more determined.

“Wait a minute!”

The knocking slowed, and a voice replied:

“Let me in. I need to come inside.”

The speaker’s tone was thin and reedy: an adult I didn’t recognise. I may have been six, but I also had a fairly good understanding of bathroom etiquette. Mainly that you didn’t let more than one person into an area only slightly larger than a cupboard.

“Go away!”

The knocking intensified again, until it was a frantic drum-beat, just a few feet from me and out-of-sight. I heard the voice shouting something, growing more and more desperate:

“Let me in! Just open the door, please!”

I was terrified, by that point. The hammering and yelling was so loud, and yet nobody had come to investigate it. Eventually, my teacher came to find me, angry because I had been gone almost half an hour. When I refused to open the door to let her in, she got a spare key from the receptionist and then took me to the headmaster’s office and called my parents. I was suspended for the rest of the week. I never told anyone what happened.

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[Photo via qimono/Pixabay]

Filed Under: Tales Tagged With: creepypasta, Creepypasta of the Week, doors, Knocking, Steven Shorter, unknown

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  1. Ziaheart says

    February 7, 2020 at 1:26 am

    The first episode reminds me of a pretty popular Korean scary short story:

    A man goes to an empty public bathroom. He enters a stall. As soon as he sits down on the toilet and starts his business, he hears a frantic knock. “Occupied,” he calls out, but the other person doesn’t relent. The person on the other side must be in real desperate need of relief, but so does he, and even if he weren’t, you can’t just stop in the middle. And why doesn’t that guy just try one of the other stalls? It couldn’t have all filled up already. He hadn’t heard anyone else come in. “Occupied!” he calls out again, annoyed. “Open the door! Open the door!” the person on the other side starts pleading. “I’m using it right now! And even if I wanted to, I can’t reach the door from here!” the man retorts. “Not that door. Up here,” the voice replies. The man looks up to see a pair of glowing eyes glaring at him from behind the cover of the air vent.

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  2. Purple Girl The Horror Fan says

    May 13, 2018 at 5:10 am

    Which are the most popular articles here?

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  3. Ian says

    May 10, 2018 at 1:04 pm

    I read this on the creepypasta website and remembered that I had read it a few years ago. Still a well-written story with a chilling ending.

    Reply
  4. thedarknetizen says

    May 9, 2018 at 1:55 pm

    Saw it coming, but that did not reduce the creepiness one bit! 🙂

    Reply

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